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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi folks,
Been on before but back. Had the sccount three months, but only looking at it now. Critique of profile content, and pictures. Ideas for good new ones would be helpful.
Thanks x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi folks,
Been on before but back. Had the sccount three months, but only looking at it now. Critique of profile content, and pictures. Ideas for good new ones would be helpful.
Thanks x"
Hi! Great pics TBH ... Think you have the right mix...
The only problem I have is with your profile content... It doesn't exactly flow and doesn't really make much sense!
Maybe rewrite it saying what you are looking for and the sort of things you enjoy doing |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi folks,
Been on before but back. Had the sccount three months, but only looking at it now. Critique of profile content, and pictures. Ideas for good new ones would be helpful.
Thanks x"
Good photos. Bad text. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Hi folks,
Been on before but back. Had the sccount three months, but only looking at it now. Critique of profile content, and pictures. Ideas for good new ones would be helpful.
Thanks x
Hi! Great pics TBH ... Think you have the right mix...
The only problem I have is with your profile content... It doesn't exactly flow and doesn't really make much sense!
Maybe rewrite it saying what you are looking for and the sort of things you enjoy doing"
Very constructive thank you x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Changed text! Feedback is appreciated."
a lot better but still room for improvement....
there really is no need to mention about loads of others so needing to stand out...
also I know its not a preference of yours but there are nicer ways of saying obese (try BBW) ..if people take offence at what you have written they wont contact you or even respond to your messages...its as simple as that |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Changed text! Feedback is appreciated.
a lot better but still room for improvement....
there really is no need to mention about loads of others so needing to stand out...
also I know its not a preference of yours but there are nicer ways of saying obese (try BBW) ..if people take offence at what you have written they wont contact you or even respond to your messages...its as simple as that"
Valid points. I think people are sensitive to this particular preference. However, I agree my wording could seem offensive. Will make the changes thank you |
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