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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Could anyone checkout my profile and give me some advice on attracting ladies and couples to it. Am brand new to all this. 3 weeks in and only managed to get profile verified today. any advice will be greatly appreciated.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Could anyone checkout my profile and give me some advice on attracting ladies and couples to it. Am brand new to all this. 3 weeks in and only managed to get profile verified today. any advice will be greatly appreciated. "
The substance and personality is better than many.
The presentation is awful. Use paragraphs. One great big block of text is unapproachable and, for goodness sake, improve your spelling and grammar.
Two of your photos should go as they don't show you in any discernable way. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks, i tend to write as im thinking or saying the words. Not making excuses but being from belfast might just be the problem. Have to brush up on my grammer. I lived in St Mary,s st many years ago. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"   Twice i have tried to put my profile into paragraphs and its still coming up in a block. What am i doing wrong?"
No idea. Try using the return button?
Your profile text is a bit better but, and this is just personal, I prefer the use of proper sentences. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks again, will try that and if i get no joy. i will delete and wright in again to the best of my ability  You are not a teacher by any chance? lol Laughing at the question, could find myself in an awkward situation asking things like that.. Thanks again X |
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