Hello everyone.
So I have decided to sort my profile out and start to put my self out here. Anyway I thought I would just give my brain free reign to write the description.
Is it a little OTO?
Do I need to reign in my over imaginative imagination?
As a profile is it any good?
John |
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It starts off well but I stopped reading because it's too long for me, I think you're on the right track though your personality comes through and its clear that you're ready to enjoy life.
This is the pedant in me and it really doesn't matter but it's "definitely" not "defiantly"  |
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over a year ago
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"Not at all. Thanks for the spelling spot. I am unfortunately dyslexic and it does have a horrible habit of making a fool of me. It has now been corrected."
It is fine. You have only corrected one instance of "defiantly," though (and there are other mistakes). If you can't spot them, you can use a grammar/spelling checker or mention your dyslexia. |
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i actually would read all of your profile if you sent me a respectful first message and i was interested in meeting you, so it's not too long for me.
it might be too long for other people but it's your profile and it makes a nice change to see a guy with a decent profile. a lot of it made smile and nearly laugh, i'm tired though and probably would've laughed otherwise.
pics are decent as well.  |
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Hi,
I noticed you had no cock shots readily available.
You should upload lots of these as that is the key to getting the attention of these slutty slutbags.
 TSH |
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"I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.
Good advice from TSH there  "
Thank you Lady Slut. I only give the very best advice.
TSH |
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"I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.
Good advice from TSH there "
I have given you some fabs for your slutty photos.
I like to see a slut who brings her own collar, I do hope you have the lead for it.
TSH |
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I enjoyed reading your profile, made me laugh, especially the "silver surfer" part  However, imho, it does go on a bit too long. You sound like a really lovely guy, I'm sure you will do well on here, FM x |
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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago
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"I think you cone across as a nice guy with a gsoh but for me the text is too long! You could get rid of 50% of that.
Good advice from TSH there
Thank you Lady Slut. I only give the very best advice.
TSH"
He called me Lady Slut.....swooooooon |
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I read almost all of your profile,if you had messaged me and were near enough for us to meet I would only have needed to skim read it. I think it's a good profile. |
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Maybe but education isn't the same as intelligence. Anyone can read something but understanding it is another matter. If only I could find away to stop him ploughing through his 9 lives. He's already in minus figures. The vet is happy as my cat has probably funded a fair bit of his Porsche. Maybe I will start will a book on road safety. |
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It's well written, and your pics are great, IMHO, you just need to chop the text down. 