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Is mine too long?

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Hello there, I'm Danny, new to FS.

Just got round to writing my profile and now I'm wondering is it a bit too long? I didn't want it to generic and tried to inject it with my own personality, but maybe it could do with a bit of a trim here and there? ...So, I'm intrigued to hear what you folks think.

Thanks in advance for any feedback you may wish to throw my way

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By *exy essex girlWoman over a year ago

harlow

It may be long, but I think it's very good ( and funny ) xxx

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By *uited staffs guyMan over a year ago

staffordshire

I was just getting my sky remote out and then read the profile text

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By *inky-MinxWoman over a year ago

Grantham

I like your long hair

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Long or short very few will read it anyway , but it's a good effort

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By *inky-MinxWoman over a year ago

Grantham

I wouldn't read that much text and the first para has been done by others.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

It's really good! Like it.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Hello there, I'm Danny, new to FS.

Thanks in advance for any feedback you may wish to throw my way

For me it's a little too long. I also didn't find the cancer joke funny but I'm sure others will. Trim down all sections and a better range of pics would be good. At the moment some of the images are pretty much duplicated

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Absolutely love it

Should be more like this.... I may have to rewrite mine

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By *inky-MinxWoman over a year ago

Grantham

"I also didn't find the cancer joke funny"

Yes, I forgot to say that. Everyone on here will very likely know someone with cancer and it really isn't funny

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By *ingerTwistWoman over a year ago

Edinburgh

I think it's epic. Raised a giggle

I wouldn't change a thing.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

End of the day though is it going to get you laid? My guess is probably not.

Just sayin.

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

Absolutely brilliant, so witty and humorous loved every word. Just a shame you aren't closer!!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Hello there, I'm Danny, new to FS.

Thanks in advance for any feedback you may wish to throw my way

It's a great read - change nothing!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Hello there, I'm Danny, new to FS.

Thanks in advance for any feedback you may wish to throw my way

I think it's much much better than mine.

Thank God you're not as good looking as me.

But then again you've got hair.

Given the preceeding feedback just goes to show you can't please em all.

If you find its working for you leave it alone.

If a few months down the line it's not, give it an update.

Good luck chap, have fun. Drop by the lounge sometime and show your face.

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By *issy louWoman over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

I think it's great....a refreshing change!

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"Hello there, I'm Danny, new to FS.

Thanks in advance for any feedback you may wish to throw my way

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I personally think your profile write up is entertaining and its mostly up the street of what women want ,good luck

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By *inkyKellyCDTV/TS over a year ago

Coventry

Possibly a tiiiiny bit long but it's so nice to see one where some actual personality shines through! Agreed with your first paragraph in it.

Good as it is! Like others I'm kind of meh on the cancer joke, but it's just me being precious about it I suppose, since it's a sensitive issue for me personally (and others I'm sure) but feel free to tell me to get a sense of humour

Can't please everyone.

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