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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Single man again. And need someone to be my first verified meet. Who's going to take the offer?  "
You might have more luck if you add a few photos and perhaps brighten up your profile text. Think of this as the advert to the wonderful world of you. Best of luck. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thank you. I can't add more pics I got private ones. I need to keep my face private but I could add more pics. What do u mean by the text?? Add more? S |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The text is, in my opinion, too short and tells those reading it very little about you apart from it being rather whiney about only having been in boring relationships.
Think of buying a new book by a totally new author. The cover needs to catch the eye of people in the book shelf (translates to fab pictures) and the blurb on the back gives and enticing overview of what lies beneath the cover (the profile text). Hoping this doesn't sound rude, but at the moment your book has a plain grey cover and the blurb reads 'this is a book. If you're interested, read it'. Personally, I'm already leafing through the next book along. HHx |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Thank you. I can't add more pics I got private ones. I need to keep my face private but I could add more pics. What do u mean by the text?? Add more? S"
You can't add more pictures ... But you can add more pictures. I would say that you probably can but it might be good if you made your mind up on that one. As above, your profile is not one that will attract anyone's attention. |
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By *aeBabeWoman
over a year ago
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"The text is, in my opinion, too short and tells those reading it very little about you apart from it being rather whiney about only having been in boring relationships.
Think of buying a new book by a totally new author. The cover needs to catch the eye of people in the book shelf (translates to fab pictures) and the blurb on the back gives and enticing overview of what lies beneath the cover (the profile text). Hoping this doesn't sound rude, but at the moment your book has a plain grey cover and the blurb reads 'this is a book. If you're interested, read it'. Personally, I'm already leafing through the next book along. HHx "
Very good analogy  |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"The text is, in my opinion, too short and tells those reading it very little about you apart from it being rather whiney about only having been in boring relationships.
Think of buying a new book by a totally new author. The cover needs to catch the eye of people in the book shelf (translates to fab pictures) and the blurb on the back gives and enticing overview of what lies beneath the cover (the profile text). Hoping this doesn't sound rude, but at the moment your book has a plain grey cover and the blurb reads 'this is a book. If you're interested, read it'. Personally, I'm already leafing through the next book along. HHx
Very good analogy "
Thank you angel HHx |
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