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By *manda63Woman
over a year ago
Southampton |
"Hi
Fed back on our profile please
Good or back ...
Thanks xxx
Can I be brutal? Bad grammar. No pictures. No idea of what you offer.
It is terrible."
I agree, bad spelling etc and it reads like a shopping list, bit too rigid |
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By *manda63Woman
over a year ago
Southampton |
"Thanks
We
Changed some things in profile and added photos
So hopefully a bit hotter now
Than as wax a little boring ..."
Reads better and good pics too. Just one little thing, I would remove the part about being disease free |
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By *odareyouMan
over a year ago
not far from iceland,,,,,, tescos is nearer though :-) (near leeds) |
There are countless threads offering generic profile advice in the archives, they're mainly by single guys the advice is appropriate for any demographic though.. happy reading ![](/icons/s/biggrin.gif) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Hi
Fed back on our profile please
Good or back ...
Thanks xxx"
Not bad at all now - some great pics by the way We agree about dropping the disease bit though. |
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