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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey there I'm new to this thing looking to get some new experience but unfortunately not been able to work it how it goes n is there any problems with my profile or its just my thoughts help me n fab my pics if u like them cheers ..hope after I will start to get done response with your help XXXX |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your first paragraph needs breaking down and correcting a lot, you've got cap letters where you don't need them, your English is quite broken too, or is that down to the speed you set your profile up? Read through it and correct the obvious mistakes. |
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If I was you, I'd think back to the "Reading & Writing" lessons you had at Infants School, and implement some of what they taught you. Most importantly, CAPITAL letters at the start of SENTENCES, and FULL-STOPS at the end.
The way it is, reading it is too much work to bother.
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