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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hey all, never done this before. Really aimed a women but happy to receive advice from guys too. What could I do to improve my profile? Would you look twice and if not why not.
Merry Christmas one and all |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Hey all, never done this before. Really aimed a women but happy to receive advice from guys too. What could I do to improve my profile? Would you look twice and if not why not.
Merry Christmas one and all "
Apart from the first sentence of your profile which is somewhat negative and expletive, not much wrong. One or two grammatical errors which will only irritate a few. Speaking in full sentences always helps. Most take "cannot accommodate" as "married," unless an explanation is provided. The only real show stopper is the implication that you do not even have a private face picture to send. Few people will meet without one being available. |
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"Hey all, never done this before. Really aimed a women but happy to receive advice from guys too. What could I do to improve my profile? Would you look twice and if not why not.
Merry Christmas one and all "
The first sentence is negative and although you say you're 'professional' you can't actually spell the plural of 'lady' so for those reasons alone, I'd ignore it. |
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By *amissCouple
over a year ago
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Yes the first sentence is not good. Apart from that, your profile is not too bad. However, I don't like your photo showing your pink pants! Also we would be wary of a single guy that can't accommodate, maybe explain that in your text for clarity. Good luck! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hey all, never done this before. Really aimed a women but happy to receive advice from guys too. What could I do to improve my profile? Would you look twice and if not why not.
Merry Christmas one and all
Apart from the first sentence of your profile which is somewhat negative and expletive, not much wrong. One or two grammatical errors which will only irritate a few. Speaking in full sentences always helps. Most take "cannot accommodate" as "married," unless an explanation is provided. The only real show stopper is the implication that you do not even have a private face picture to send. Few people will meet without one being available."
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I would have no interest in starting conversation with someone who doesn't have a face picture To exchange privately via private message, especially since if privacy is such an issue, you can delete the photos you attach to a sent message after it as been read |
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