Saying that you 'guarantee' is a bit naff in my opinion. What recourse is there for a lady who slides off and says 'shit shag'? 
Also when you say 'a bit about me' there really is a little bit. Your profile is mostly to be about you so expand that bit more. Just join in. |
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By *eddABC OP Man
over a year ago
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"Saying that you 'guarantee' is a bit naff in my opinion. What recourse is there for a lady who slides off and says 'shit shag'?
Also when you say 'a bit about me' there really is a little bit. Your profile is mostly to be about you so expand that bit more. Just join in. "
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"I made a few corrections. Is it better?"
I wouldn't start off with a negative... my favourite profiles are written by people who don't take themselves too seriously and sound like they're going to be fun company. When they start with stuff like 'I'm not...' I get bored. I want to hear 'I am...' so they're positive statements. 
The spelling people like good spelling and grammar so I'd check the 'acquainted' word.
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By *eddABC OP Man
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"I made a few corrections. Is it better?
I wouldn't start off with a negative... my favourite profiles are written by people who don't take themselves too seriously and sound like they're going to be fun company. When they start with stuff like 'I'm not...' I get bored. I want to hear 'I am...' so they're positive statements.
The spelling people like good spelling and grammar so I'd check the 'acquainted' word.
Good luck x"
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"I made a few corrections. Is it better?"
Yeah, much better. Check your spelling and space it out a bit more. When one reads it out loud, it sounds hectic and rushed. Also, have a variety of photos and try smiling in some. Join in on the chat rooms and forum, check out the meets section and message people who match what you're looking for with a personalised message after having read their profile. |
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