Some things could be said with fewer words - eg, just say safe sex only, without the elaboration. You've followed a similar habit with some other points.
In general, it's not worth over stating the obvious. Trim out the dead wood.
You state that you're charismatic - interesting choice of word.
Keep at it, as it's better than most new guys' profiles here. Feel free to message me anytime to get more feedback - I'm tired atm but would take a lot of time to give you one to one direct feedback in future.
Regularly review it too, to ensure it still reflects you in the best way. |
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"Elaborate?"
He means too many dicks, not enough originality. I imagine, anyway, cuz that's what I thought when I looked at them.
The text is fine. I would get rid of the first line. I never understood why everyone copies and pastes the whole "I am x, looking to meet y, z" Where does the 'and' go?!?! Its y AND z! You only remove the 'and' in a list of 3 or more!!!! Aaahhhhh!
Sorry, it's a pet peeve. Just delete the line. The profile already states what you're looking for. Or write it in a more original way, at least.
Good luck.
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"I'd sort your photos out first.
I'd tend to agree."
Me too get creative with your camera and the self timer and maybe take some time to do a little editing too. Might seem like a ball ache but when I click on a guys profile I go straight to pics if there's more cock pics than anything else I don't bother reading profile text and im sure I'm not the only one who does this. Fab has loads of single men to offer make yourself stand out take some good pics and have fun with the poses, good luck OP
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