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Profile Review . Lined up in frontt of the firing squad..The truth hurts !!!
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As various members are brave enough to line their profile up for a public review and I have commented on other profiles in the past , I have decided to have mine reviewed .
I am now lined up in front of the during squad and know that the truth hurts !!!. However you only learn in life by listening to feedback from others and taking the relevant action if applicable . |
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It's interesting, rather unnecessarily detailed, for example, the list of flowers - and have you spelt them all right? Veola is the name of a recycling company in Brighton.
You're getting meets so it works and it's good. 7/10  |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
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I would give it a 7/10 too, some of the detail on there is really not needed - I don't think we really need to know your opinion on Marks and Spencers mens clothing range! 
Your pics are a bit boring too....all a bit 'samey' - a bit of imagination wouldn't go amiss.
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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago
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Your profile reads like a dating profile up to a point. Then you start going into unnecessary detail about how many women you've shagged in one night. It swings from dull (begonias?) to bragging in quite short order.
There is nothing wrong with long profiles if that's what you think portrays you properly, but I think that if you struggle to express yourself succinctly, you may struggle to get your desires across in messages.
However you're obviously active so, if it aint broke, don't fix it. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"As various members are brave enough to line their profile up for a public review and I have commented on other profiles in the past , I have decided to have mine reviewed .
I am now lined up in front of the during squad and know that the truth hurts !!!. However you only learn in life by listening to feedback from others and taking the relevant action if applicable ."
Hi Pat,
I agree with the other comments. Too much info on your non-swinging hobbies and interests. A brief sentence or two would be fine. Your profile is too long.Try and edit it down a bit. You have also repeated yourself on a couple of occasions. Photos are good, but why are you wearing your sunglasses all the time, even indoors? People like to see others eyes.
Hope that helps.
Max |
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By (user no longer on site)
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Is there a possibility of someone sending me a message to help me with my profile please, as I know myself it needs to be updated, but I don't want the whole forum pick nicking at my profile,
I know myself too that what I look like isn't really what, a lot of people want, but I don't want to change my looks just for a fuck.... and I know one criticism is to have a face pic on show, but I would send it in a private message, |
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"Is there a possibility of someone sending me a message to help me with my profile please, as I know myself it needs to be updated, but I don't want the whole forum pick nicking at my profile,
I know myself too that what I look like isn't really what, a lot of people want, but I don't want to change my looks just for a fuck.... and I know one criticism is to have a face pic on show, but I would send it in a private message, "
It might be better to start your own thread. But as you haven't....it's called hijacking.....do a forum search for 'profile advice' is my advice. |
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"Your profile reads like a dating profile up to a point. Then you start going into unnecessary detail about how many women you've shagged in one night. It swings from dull (begonias?) to bragging in quite short order.
There is nothing wrong with long profiles if that's what you think portrays you properly, but I think that if you struggle to express yourself succinctly, you may struggle to get your desires across in messages.
However you're obviously active so, if it aint broke, don't fix it."
. Thanks for the guidance and advice and taking the time to do a detailed response . I have noted all of your comments . |
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"As various members are brave enough to line their profile up for a public review and I have commented on other profiles in the past , I have decided to have mine reviewed .
I am now lined up in front of the during squad and know that the truth hurts !!!. However you only learn in life by listening to feedback from others and taking the relevant action if applicable .
Hi Pat,
I agree with the other comments. Too much info on your non-swinging hobbies and interests. A brief sentence or two would be fine. Your profile is too long.Try and edit it down a bit. You have also repeated yourself on a couple of occasions. Photos are good, but why are you wearing your sunglasses all the time, even indoors? People like to see others eyes.
Hope that helps.
Max"
. The sun glasses are to disguise my face . In an ideal world there would be no need to wear sunglasses but I am not prepared to openly display my face on a swingers site . |
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"It's interesting, rather unnecessarily detailed, for example, the list of flowers - and have you spelt them all right? Veola is the name of a recycling company in Brighton.
You're getting meets so it works and it's good. 7/10 "
Hi . Thanks for the reply and well spotted for noting the spelling mistake . I will research the correct spelling and amend it.. |
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"I would give it a 7/10 too, some of the detail on there is really not needed - I don't think we really need to know your opinion on Marks and Spencers mens clothing range!
Your pics are a bit boring too....all a bit 'samey' - a bit of imagination wouldn't go amiss.
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. Thanks for the comments .I did advertise for a photographer to take some photos but the post was removed as I offered to pay the photographer . |
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