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I cringe having to do this but.....
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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago
Hull (ish) |
Sorry folks ..... another pathetic
'Help me with my profile thread'
I've withheld doing this because I've seen several of these on here recently. Some with positive replies some shot down big time.
Okay. I'm babbling. ...
Getting nowhere fast on here. Drawing a blank most the time.
Gimme it straight about my profile.ill take it on the chin or blush but will make adjustments where necessary.
Thank for your time xx |
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Hello 
You say "Hello ladies" but say you will meet couples and the bit about biting is on every second profile I read.
Apart from that your pictures are nice, you have a smiling, good looking face picture and come across well. Good luck. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hello!!
-The profile starts off rather negatively. I like fun, witty men, so that would be a red flag.
-If you are just talking to ladies ("hi ladies") then we, as a couple, would not be as interested.
-You don't really say much about what you are looking for.
-Get rid of the biting thing....it is sooo overdone and not very clever anyway.
I like your pics. And I don't know what you are putting in your messages, but maybe that could be tweaked as well? I dunno.
Anyway, wish you the best of luck!
-Courtney |
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By *abioMan
over a year ago
Newcastle and Gateshead |
having another read.... it doesn't actually say anything! its things that in your head may sound good... but doesn't really mean anything
okay.. so if you really think its is "8 billion to 1" against you (which is actually a rather cringy thing to say) why should people pick you as opposed to anyone else!!
give people a reason to think "wow!! i have to meet that person!" and saying you are an open book doesn't achieve that... the onus is as much on you to appeal to the reader as much as the reader does to you
what is there to entice people!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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As a single female
I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !
Just saying lol
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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago
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"As a single female
I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !
Just saying lol
Haha ... fair comment miss .noted x
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By (user no longer on site)
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"As a single female
I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !
Just saying lol
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I would definitely do him in a batman onesie  I'd insist he kept it on and used a growley voice  haha x |
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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago
Hull (ish) |
"As a single female
I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !
Just saying lol
I would definitely do him in a batman onesie I'd insist he kept it on and used a growley voice haha x"
I'll be round in 5 kitty !! 
To the batmobile! ! Lol
(Gruffly said of course ) |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"As a single female
I have to say . . . i carnt remember the last time I looked at a man in a Batman Onesie and thought to myself, hmmmmmm i need to do him !
Just saying lol
I would definitely do him in a batman onesie I'd insist he kept it on and used a growley voice haha x"
Te he, I hadnt thought of that lol |
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An ok profile overall - the pics are good too... another fan of the Onesie here (something I honestly never thought I'd say on fabs!)
The crash and burn bit made me wince - and we all know there are trillions of men here so it doesn't really add anything. Maybe a bit about what you can offer / do like?
It's all finessing though so nothing major to worry about!! Tx |
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"Sorry folks ..... another pathetic
'Help me with my profile thread'
I've withheld doing this because I've seen several of these on here recently. Some with positive replies some shot down big time.
Okay. I'm babbling. ...
Getting nowhere fast on here. Drawing a blank most the time.
Gimme it straight about my profile.ill take it on the chin or blush but will make adjustments where necessary.
Thank for your time xx "
. Your pictures seem fine and you have a good face picture .
However while you have quite a few lines in your profile , it does not really tell members anything about you . Do you have hobbies and interests and if so what are they?. What are your key selling points . There is a lot of competition on fab and a profile has to stand out just to get to the starting line . Even then it is an uphill struggle
Good luck. |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
Staffordshire Moorlands |
Yayyyyy....well done on no cock pics!!!
But please lose the 'I don't bite....' line, it's certainly not original, every other profile has it! Lol! (And yes, ok, thats an exaggeration, but so is 8 billion to one!)
Good luck |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The shy bit would put me off.... Perhaps better to mention after exchanging a few messages that you may feel a bit nervous/any on the first meet but will soon warm up! No need on profile
Agree with everyone re the bite comment being a cliche
Nice pics although the middle one with the hood up doesn't do it for me |
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Largely it's not saying anything about you. It's got stuff about fab, others, stats and mentions shyness. It needs more statements that define you. And largely make it a positive profile, as it creates a better feeling for others. |
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By *ncrath OP Man
over a year ago
Hull (ish) |
Thanks guys and girls.
I left this to roll over the weekend to see what comments came in . Thanks for the feedback.
And I guess back to the drawing board.
Totally appreciate all your comments many thanks x  |
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