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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Can you guys help me out with. My profiel. Just want to know what's you guys think a bout it. And any pointers to help out. Please don't rip me to shreds. X |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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The text looks fine to me. As for the pics...the one you have is nice, but I wouldn't really know what you look like from it, and so would probably not message. But then, as these things always go, that is just my opinion 
-Courtney |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I'm a little confused
Your comments about dressing up etc end with a question mark. Why? Surely you are making a statement, not posing a question.
It might seem pedantic, but give your profile a read through a couple of times just to make sure that everything looks right.
Sentences start with a capital letter, spaces in the right places, the right words, good grammar and punctuation.
To put it another way, think about the attention to detail you would give to a job application, your CV etc.
It's about making a good impression.
Certainly a good start though
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Would u really have sex with 99 year old woman? Personally, seeing the 18-99 age range puts me off. Makes u sound like you would fuck anything.
Also, do take the question marks away as mentioned before. It just reads badly.
Miss Nico x |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Leave the age range as is, it's the default and shows that maybe you have more of an interest in finding people that you connect with rather than worrying about age, how many 99 year old are there on here anyway? So just leave it a default, we find this a positive rather than a negative xx |
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