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over a year ago
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The I don't bite line will have most clicking off your profile there and then and the rest just goes on about a past relationship and you being a pillock! It says nothing about why you're here, what you're looking for or what you can offer. Also think about adding some pics, bum torso, suited looking nice but easy on the cock shots. Good luck. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Looks better...keep developing its you get more experienced...some photos may also help...no cock...bum, torso...that kinda thing...
You can chat anywhere...you get used to the chat rooms but the forums work equally as well...hope this help add to you enjoyment here... |
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over a year ago
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Paragraphs punctuation etc. At the moment it's all just one very long sentence.
It needs spacing out a bit to make it easier to read. At the moment all the text is all bunched together.
Think 'presentation' |
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over a year ago
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Looks much better...just remember that for some it can take a bit of time to get known and for the chatting to start...so having a lot of patience will help lots...best of luck...  |
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