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over a year ago
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You've been verified 4 times so I don't get why you want to change it?
My only suggestion is to get rid of the word boy, capital I not use i and change u for you as you've fully spelt every word except you, don't understand why |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"You've been verified 4 times so I don't get why you want to change it?
My only suggestion is to get rid of the word boy, capital I not use i and change u for you as you've fully spelt every word except you, don't understand why"
Think he is looking to meet.....all verifications so far by cam.
OP has followed the lovely ladies advice and sorted his grammar out so well done.
My suggestion might be a few more pics?
Perhaps a bit more detail of what's on offer and what you are looking for? |
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over a year ago
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Lose the text speak, try and space out your profile text so it's easier to read and get some pictures up.
It may seem picky to some to comment about grammar, spelling and punctuation, but it really can make a difference.
You have to remember that this is your shop window. Your one chance to sell yourself. You need to demonstrate that you've put some effort into it.
You only get one chance to make a first impression. |
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