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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Have you read it through a couple of times.
I had a little difficulty as I felt that in some places, a full stop would have helped and in others it felt like you finished a sentence halfway through.
You might think i'm being picky here, but spelling, grammar and punctuation can make a massive difference.
If a visitor finds your profile difficult to read or understand then you could find yourself missing out.
Your profile is your shop window. You get just one chance to make a first impression. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"I've changed my profile text is it any better or worse i do still need some more pictures up which are on there way "
Very confusing and says very little. It is an ignore from us. |
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