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so does this type of profile work?
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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... just looking for some feedback. I have tried to create a profile that is accurate, but also different from the rest that you find on here.
I'm not looking for you to be into the same things as me, just some feedback on what I've written, if possible please?
Thanks.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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As a straightforward profile, it doesn't say much about what you're actually looking for ... as a piece of prose, I loved it!! 
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Ever thought of writing a book?  |
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By *ruitWoman
over a year ago
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Well written profile and shows your personality, well done for putting in the effort.
Add in what your looking to meet although it shows from your verfications.
Well done hunny, good luck xx |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"... just looking for some feedback. I have tried to create a profile that is accurate, but also different from the rest that you find on here.
I'm not looking for you to be into the same things as me, just some feedback on what I've written, if possible please?
Thanks.
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Your profile is well written and interesting but fails on a very important level - there's no real pointed as to what you are looking for.
As to being different from the rest, well, lets guess there's 10,000 profiles on the site - you'll never be different to the rest, just hope to be better than the majority. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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many thanks for all your comments; seems there is still work to be done to make the profile more clear to illustrate what I am looking for.
Which is not 'anything' ... lol
I am a bi male that has no prejudice on sex or sexuality. If two or more people enjoy and activity together, then there is nobody who can say that it is wrong.I enjoy all company, with a particular leaning towards tgirls. |
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When I scan a profile - I jump straight to the "Looking For" section. When I find that I'm excluded, I don't have to worry about reading the rest of the profile.
Personally, I think it is way too long.
In general, I prefer something much more succinct. If I'm interested - I'll ask...then you can go into a bit more detail for me. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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yeah, I thought about that, but then previous experience makes me want to just put it all down to be read, so I don't have to keep repeating myself to people who are not serious... although I take your point... revision 3, me-thinks coming swiftly on.... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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I like what you've written, but without any photos at all we probably wouldn't contact you, there seem to be a lot of profiles, even the couples ones, with no pictures of the guys on them, in our case that puts Lisa off straight away and if the guy happens to be Bi so that i might be interested as well it makes me move on to the next profile. |
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