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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Hey all a couple of weeks ago I asked for some help with my profile. .. several people said my info was not to good!!! So after about 20 attempt I've rewrote it!!! Anyone got any suggestions? ?

Next I need a volunteer to help me with revamp of my pics!!

Darren

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

It's not bad but you still aren't selling yourself, what are your qualities? Also you've said your open to try new things but have you got anything in particular you'd like to try? It's still a bit vague

Juicy x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Thanks... you would never believe I'm a salesman lol... its so dam hard selling yourself x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Juicy... Any better?? X

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

This is our third profile and each one has had several rewrites and tweaks! It takes a while to get it right. I find it easier to type it in a word doc so we can read it through properly then copy and paste it on here.

Yours is not bad at the mo, leave it a few days and then review it again.

Juicy x

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By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

Thanks x

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By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I think it's ok

..possibly take some different pics but the actual profile is ok. Darcy

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By *issy louWoman over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

Not a bad profile. ...personally I would lose the 'hehe' - always think it a bit odd when blokes start 'hehe ing' on profiles - real men don't 'hehe'!