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over a year ago
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Certainly among the better single male profiles on fab, not that I look at many.
A few newbies have been asking for comments on their profiles, and to be honest, most of them leave a lot to be desired. Not the case with yours.
Nice to see that you haven't strayed down the 'i'll only have two lines of text and loads of cock pics' route, but instead gone for an approach that tells prospective meets what they can expect from you.
If I were to make any criticism, it would just be on grammar, sentence construction etc, but it is nice to see that you haven't clumped all of your text into one paragraph.
It's easy enough to follow.
I don't think you'll have many problems getting meets, as your profile shows that you're someone who puts in the effort.
That said, please remember that Single guys vastly outnumber couples and single women on here
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Thanks for the honest review really appreciate it I will have a look at my grammar! English sometimes gets rushed
Again thanks and hope you have a fun weekend ahead of you |
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over a year ago
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OP. Your profile looks good and apart from the few things pointed out above wouldn't change anything. I would try and find a social near you so you can meet people and get verified. Then you should have no problem 
Ps. Lovely pics  |
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"OP. Your profile looks good and apart from the few things pointed out above wouldn't change anything. I would try and find a social near you so you can meet people and get verified. Then you should have no problem
Ps. Lovely pics "
Thanks for the advice
Nice pics too |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Any advice on mine? I just keep drawing a blank when I try to add to it"
Not a huge amount wrong with it in my view, except that, given how many messages women (in particular) get, do you really think that they have time to message you to ask what you like, and perhaps more importantly, what you can do for them?
Consider this possibility.
Someone has looked at your profile after looking at someone else's who's profile shows exactly what he likes and how he likes to please a woman.
Putting any physical attraction issues aside, which one do you think she's more likely to go for?
There's nothing wrong with being a little mysterious, and women have got this down to a fine art, but I would suggest you try to think about what you can say that will appeal to those you are trying to attract.
This is your advert. You need to sell yourself.
Think about it this way, how many adverts for products do you see that tell you how much money the manufacturer is making from all their sales? You don't. Advertising is all about creating a demand for the product. Making you want it. Appealing to your desires.
In most cases, even when you don't actually need what they're selling.
You need to make yourself stand out from the thousands of other guys on here.
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