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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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So, unlike most of the half wits on here I thought I'd put a little effort into my profile and yet, despite this, my door is yet to be beaten down by hoards of smoking hot and semi naked women... What's with that?
Welcome any feedback. Might be that I've managed to inject too much personality into it and everyone can tell I'm an arsehole |
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By *igeiaWoman
over a year ago
Bristol |
Can I point out (having read the aforementioned profile) that this " ' " is an apostrophe and this " , " is a comma. Within the context of your profile I thought you might like to check this. |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
Staffordshire Moorlands |
"Can I point out (having read the aforementioned profile) that this " ' " is an apostrophe and this " , " is a comma. Within the context of your profile I thought you might like to check this. "
Exactly what I thought when I read it!!
Seriously though, you've been here 4 weeks, did you really expect a queue round the block? Take time chatting, getting to know people, maybe go to a social or club. As is often said in these forums, this is Fabswingers not Insta-Shag! Good luck |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Can I point out (having read the aforementioned profile) that this " ' " is an apostrophe and this " , " is a comma. Within the context of your profile I thought you might like to check this. "
Well that's pretty embarrassing... Consider myself corrected |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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P.s. Not expecting a queue, was just messing. Just trying to see how other people view what I've written... Or for that matter the face pics, what's the verdict, does it put people off being too open? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Mmm it's a bit of an epic read. You do talk too much. "
That has been said before, lol
Thanks all for the feedback. Sounds like it needs a bit of an edit so will wait till I've woken up a bit and give it a go |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Looks like a dating site profile.
Lots of unnecessary information which may work if you are looking for a relationship but overly wordy for here."
I agree... whilst its a very Friendly profile... its more like for a Dating Site. Lose those photos!! They do nothing for you!! Put up dome Tasteful body shots...(not Cock pics) |
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By *eeriseWoman
over a year ago
Manchester and that's all you need to know |
"So, unlike most of the half wits on here I thought I'd put a little effort into my profile and yet, despite this, my door is yet to be beaten down by hoards of smoking hot and semi naked women... What's with that?
Welcome any feedback. Might be that I've managed to inject too much personality into it and everyone can tell I'm an arsehole "
Your profile notes are too long and to be honest when I saw the length I clicked off.
Happy swinging |
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Boring to read with too much unnecessary detail..we know you are tall from your profile.
The pictures..sorry but they're dreadful. Show your ass or wearing a nice shirt, but not in animal slippers.
Maybe the profile would appeal to the younger women, but not to a lady nearing 50 like myself
I wish you the best of luck
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"Boring to read with too much unnecessary detail..we know you are tall from your profile.
The pictures..sorry but they're dreadful. Show your ass or wearing a nice shirt, but not in animal slippers.
Maybe the profile would appeal to the younger women, but not to a lady nearing 50 like myself
I wish you the best of luck
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What about mine then....does it appeal as much as you do to me ? |
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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago
Staffordshire Moorlands |
"Boring to read with too much unnecessary detail..we know you are tall from your profile.
The pictures..sorry but they're dreadful. Show your ass or wearing a nice shirt, but not in animal slippers.
Maybe the profile would appeal to the younger women, but not to a lady nearing 50 like myself
I wish you the best of luck
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Totally agree on the pics....and the first one - the one with the daft slippers - that looks suspiciously like a wedding ring on your left hand? Us ladies are shrewd little buggers you know, we never miss a trick! |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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"Boring to read with too much unnecessary detail..we know you are tall from your profile.
The pictures..sorry but they're dreadful. Show your ass or wearing a nice shirt, but not in animal slippers.
Maybe the profile would appeal to the younger women, but not to a lady nearing 50 like myself
I wish you the best of luck
Totally agree on the pics....and the first one - the one with the daft slippers - that looks suspiciously like a wedding ring on your left hand? Us ladies are shrewd little buggers you know, we never miss a trick! "
Elementary my dear Watson.. Must have got your magnifying glass out for that one. Was married and that pic was from a year ago. The same ring is now worn on my right hand, lol.
So on the subject of pics... Women seem to love the torso shot but "standing in front of a mirror" pics make me cringe... What's the best shot to catch a woman's eye? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Just wanted to say a quick thanks to those who contributed... Have made a few changes and updated the pics so hopefully it won't be so offensive to you in the future, hahaha
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