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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Glance to your right and do a search of previous forum threads started by single guys asking the very same question, they offer a wealth of advice.
The best bit of advice, take the advice you are given - so many guys on here ask, make no changes and wonder why nothing changes!!
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Expand your profile more than two lines of text is not enough to sell yourself and get some nice pics up. Have a look at some of the more verified guys on here will show you it's not all about cock shots. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Whatever that first picture is, I think it's your bell end, get rid of it.
Second write something about your self. You say you're looking for the usual generic stuff but how are people to know if you're what they're looking for when you don't say anything about you |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Personally I don't like your pics. They are blurred and unflattering. I am sure you could have better ones if you put some thought into them. You look ok from the little i saw so i think you have photo potential. Have a look at lots of others and get some ideas.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Pics are poo and profile lacking grammar and substance....mines not great but be patient...look at other blokes profiles and take note....bide your time n the fun will begin |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Sentences start with a capital letter and end with a punctuation mark. Normally this is a full stop, but it could be either an exclamation or question mark if appropriate. There should be two spaces left after the end of each sentence. The informal contraction of I am is I'm, not im.
It is often said that a picture is worth a thousand words. Better then to try for decent pictures beacuse at present, you are struggling against two thousand unflattering words!
All the advice given is good. The stark reality is that there are scores if not hundreds of single guys for any lady to choose from. A profile needs to stand out for the right reasons. It needs to be easy to read and show something of your character. Effort is likely to be rewarded, so heed the advice, sort out the punctuation and redo the photos. Happy hunting! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Mine is probably also rubbish, however that's another topic altogether! I'd start by altering the profile wording as at the moment it's a bit of an intimidating WALLOFTEXT
See below:
Hi all, I'm mark. I'm a single guy who loves to socialise. I'm a non-smoker (but dont mind smokers!), I'm 5ft9, slim(ish), and a hard-working guy who enjoys a night out. I'm a fun, friendly guy who can hold a decent conversation.
I have no age barrier (as long as your over 18 and not fake!)
I'm a very curious guy looking to try new experiences and to make new friends along the way, so if you are looking for a decent fun friendly guy I'm your man!
I always enjoy pleasing the people I'm with and have not failed yet so whether you are a single lady or a couple (straight or bi) I'm willing to try so come say hi and lets have some fun!
Only genuine people who enjoy good mutual fun both ways (I'm open-minded) for NSA fun.
Couples most welcome.
Just a quick re-write of yours to break it up a bit, but you get the idea. |
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By (user no longer on site)
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"Mine is probably also rubbish, however that's another topic altogether! I'd start by altering the profile wording as at the moment it's a bit of an intimidating WALLOFTEXT
See below:
Hi all, I'm mark. I'm a single guy who loves to socialise. I'm a non-smoker (but dont mind smokers!), I'm 5ft9, slim(ish), and a hard-working guy who enjoys a night out. I'm a fun, friendly guy who can hold a decent conversation.
I have no age barrier (as long as your over 18 and not fake!)
I'm a very curious guy looking to try new experiences and to make new friends along the way, so if you are looking for a decent fun friendly guy I'm your man!
I always enjoy pleasing the people I'm with and have not failed yet so whether you are a single lady or a couple (straight or bi) I'm willing to try so come say hi and lets have some fun!
Only genuine people who enjoy good mutual fun both ways (I'm open-minded) for NSA fun.
Couples most welcome.
Just a quick re-write of yours to break it up a bit, but you get the idea."
Very generous of you! If the OP does not cut and paste this one wonders. Horse and water come to mind.... |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Ah I was on anyway! Also it prompted me to update the formatting of my own profile after I did this one as mine fell short somewhat by comparison!
NOTE: I only reformatted mine! It may still be absolutely terrible! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Pictures are shocking. Text is poorly written and even if you take advantage of the post above it still says nothing of any interest or originality. It's just another bland single males profile that fails to stand out at all all. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Lose the unnecessary question marks too!
Don't give up fella just be patient and don't be pushy. Try and attend a few socials/clubs too in order to get veri's.....good way to let others know you are genuine. Good luck! |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"thanks again everyone will be uploading new and a lot better pics soon  "
At the minute you'd be better off deleting the pictures, especially the cock one rather than leaving them.up till you take new ones.
It makes it look about an inch an a half long |
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