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does this profile make sense

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

have been on here for a while and still get asked to explain my profile please tell me where i.m going wrong.

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"have been on here for a while and still get asked to explain my profile please tell me where i.m going wrong."

I'd actually prefer it without the 3rd paragraph; spelling out the punchline rather spoils a joke.

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"have been on here for a while and still get asked to explain my profile please tell me where i.m going wrong.

I'd actually prefer it without the 3rd paragraph; spelling out the punchline rather spoils a joke."

I liked the fact that it was different. The 3rd paragraph then kills it.

By (user no longer on site) OP over a year ago

thanks for advice have now erased paragraph 3

By *opping_candyWoman over a year ago

West Yorkshire

I totally misinterpreted it and thought it was describing some bizarre master/slave relationship!

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

I understood it straight away but can understand your need to explain if it was confusing some people

By *litterbabeWoman over a year ago

hiding from cock pics.

I am a little confused...

But different is good.

If it is working all find if not the adjust... Makes sense..

By (user no longer on site) over a year ago

"have been on here for a while and still get asked to explain my profile please tell me where i.m going wrong."

Its not totally clear why not rewrite it and it may help a little with meets.