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Hi just rejoined would like some input

By *jg83 OP Man 51 weeks ago

BURNLEY

So I've just got back on here after a while being out. I really hate writing profiles but had a go any tips, constructive criticism is welcome. TIA

By *hrimper36Couple 51 weeks ago

Central France dept 36

Personally I’d break the bio up a bit because a block of writing like yours can put people off of reading it but sentences guides the reader along.

Seems ok to me but then I’m a man and not interested in jumping you.

Welcome back and good luck.