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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Your profile is okay but it needs a bit of tweaking; some spelling mistakes though in the case of maby its easy to spell it wrong when one is typing fast. Needs some capital letters, commas and full stops. Also the word pleasing moved to the end of the line that says ' Love teasing as much as I do'.
The last paragraph needs sorting though its more the first line needs to say I can only accommodate but not travel etc as it seems a bit disjointed.
Other than that its fine and you have some lovely pictures |
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