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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hello,
Been here before a few years back got abit curious and decided to have a look.
I’m 34 and leeds based tho for the right situation I’d travel.
Also….as title suggests….please can I have some profile feedback/criticism ……….I’m bracing myself! |
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Do away with any information that is already listed on your profile, such as age and location (unless you move between locations etc)
"What's on offer" makes it sound like a knocking shop
Saying you'll try to get back to people makes it sound like you'd be doing them a favour to grace them with your reply - Xeno |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Do away with any information that is already listed on your profile, such as age and location (unless you move between locations etc)
"What's on offer" makes it sound like a knocking shop
Saying you'll try to get back to people makes it sound like you'd be doing them a favour to grace them with your reply - Xeno"
But like I am gracing them with my reply…………
But point taken!
Is there anything else I could say that might appeal to someone as I’m not to sure how much I should say about at myself?
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"Hello,
Been here before a few years back got abit curious and decided to have a look.
I’m 34 and leeds based tho for the right situation I’d travel.
Also….as title suggests….please can I have some profile feedback/criticism ……….I’m bracing myself!"
The first three lines of your profile are pointless. No one wants you to greet them or thanks them for looking at your profile and no one cares that you have been here before. It's harsh, but true.
Other than that you have taken the time to get photo verified and put up a face pic, which are both plus factors. However a smiling face pic might be more pleasing on the eye.
From here on in expect rejection, it will happen, but don't dwell on it. Find opportunities to mix through the forum and chatrooms as well as local social events or club nights. If you put the effort in you'll find what yor looking for. Good luck
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hello,
Been here before a few years back got abit curious and decided to have a look.
I’m 34 and leeds based tho for the right situation I’d travel.
Also….as title suggests….please can I have some profile feedback/criticism ……….I’m bracing myself!
The first three lines of your profile are pointless. No one wants you to greet them or thanks them for looking at your profile and no one cares that you have been here before. It's harsh, but true.
Other than that you have taken the time to get photo verified and put up a face pic, which are both plus factors. However a smiling face pic might be more pleasing on the eye.
From here on in expect rejection, it will happen, but don't dwell on it. Find opportunities to mix through the forum and chatrooms as well as local social events or club nights. If you put the effort in you'll find what yor looking for. Good luck
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Ok, maybe see your point
Still feel I can flesh out the text more |
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"Still feel I can flesh out the text more"
Oh yes, there could be plenty more flesh on the bone but only you know your selling points. Don't forget you can change your profile as often as you like, so if it's not working change it. |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Still feel I can flesh out the text more
Oh yes, there could be plenty more flesh on the bone but only you know your selling points. Don't forget you can change your profile as often as you like, so if it's not working change it."
Is there anything that might grab your interest or you might look for? |
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By *sBlueWoman
over a year ago
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"Still feel I can flesh out the text more
Oh yes, there could be plenty more flesh on the bone but only you know your selling points. Don't forget you can change your profile as often as you like, so if it's not working change it.
Is there anything that might grab your interest or you might look for?"
There isn’t much about you? |
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Still feel I can flesh out the text more
Oh yes, there could be plenty more flesh on the bone but only you know your selling points. Don't forget you can change your profile as often as you like, so if it's not working change it.
Is there anything that might grab your interest or you might look for?
There isn’t much about you? "
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"Is there anything that might grab your interest or you might look for?"
Only you know you.
Neither I, or any other poster, knows more about you than you do, so we are not best placed to advise you what you have to offer. |
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By *ucka39Man
over a year ago
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Hi op
Their is plenty of helpful advice among the pile of threads from previous folk whom asked similar as yourself it's a useful tool for you to create something that fits around you personally just type in the forum profile help advice plenty of tips that users have provided to assist
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By (user no longer on site) OP
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"Hi op
Their is plenty of helpful advice among the pile of threads from previous folk whom asked similar as yourself it's a useful tool for you to create something that fits around you personally just type in the forum profile help advice plenty of tips that users have provided to assist
Good luck "
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By *ucka39Man
over a year ago
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"Hi op
Their is plenty of helpful advice among the pile of threads from previous folk whom asked similar as yourself it's a useful tool for you to create something that fits around you personally just type in the forum profile help advice plenty of tips that users have provided to assist
Good luck
Thank you I will be sure to do abit more research then! "
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