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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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It needs some tweaking; two photos need to be turned round, change the capital letter for however as its not needed after a comma, remove the apostrophe in know's in the line about meeting females alone, other than that its fine although you haven't specified as to whether you only meet females or couples too so consider putting that in the introductory paragraph which you don't have.
Other than a bit of tweaking, its not too bad and having a re-write now and again is good as can tempt some more interest.
As to the please respond to messages even if its a no thanks, sorry but that won't always happen as some people, so they say, get hundreds of messages per day, unless yours stands out, it won't get responded to.
Have a look on the introductions forum as there has been a lot of advice given on there  |
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