I think you could precis your current content and then add information about what makes you right for us.
Your pics seemed mostly like jigsaw puzzle pieces, so struggling a little to feel the sense of the complete you.
Try not to elaborate too much on the generic single male stuff, instead giving us more of a flavour of the excitement of the unique you.  |
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"I think you could precis your current content and then add information about what makes you right for us.
Your pics seemed mostly like jigsaw puzzle pieces, so struggling a little to feel the sense of the complete you.
Try not to elaborate too much on the generic single male stuff, instead giving us more of a flavour of the excitement of the unique you. "
I think his pics are great love a guy in a suit and love the bum pic in trousers gorgeous shape although your size puts me off lol way to big for me haha x |
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It looks fine to me. You could say a bit more about what the people you meet could expect. Do you spend too much time in a suit looking for fun or do you spend too much time in a suit so you're looking for fun? 
