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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Hi all, I'd really appreciate se feedback on my profile.
Just really feedback on the vibe its portraying particularly from MF couples and single women. Thanks in advance everyone.
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hey dude!
I think the profile looks good, I have a few critiques though that you might find helpful. The ad at the start is very funny, and it's good you've got a serious paragraph afterwards. However, you're quite negative in your serious part. You're listing things you don't want in a very unsure manner. You're not against meeting single females but couples are more reliable? This doesn't say much and feels more like a complaint about single women than an informative and useful statement. Then you say not 'normally' online for pic fabbing and attention, which means you are sometimes? Very confusing.
Next is addressing your accommodation situation. You say you're discreet, can't accomm on your profile, but in your bio say you can but it's a hassle? Very confusing again and might lead the majority of couples to think you're cheating, and that would be a huge red flag for them. The reiteration of no strings and hassle free along with that doesn't help your case either. Sounds like you have something that is going to give you hassle at least in some aspects of your life.
And then I'd like to address 'I know it's all about the women'. Show don't tell is really all I can say here.
'I am open to a lot of scenarios as long as everyone is happy and friendly' What scenarios? Surely the prior socials are to make sure you're all happy and friendly?
'I'm not in to dull fun or conversation. So if I stop replying to you, re read your last message. Did it provoke, engage or add anything to our conversation? Then that's why I stopped replying. The only thing I'm desperate for is lack of drama and sketchy vibes.' And this comes across as condescending and a bit aggressive? I'd just leave it out. Most women have a lot of single men after them, so you'll be struggling to get a consistent conversation more than they'll be hung up on why you didn't reply.
Last, your pictures are.. okay. I'd lose the bathroom mirror shot as it's very blurry, get more pictures of you on there using the video tape your self, pause and screenshot to get good pictures from different angles. To be honest, the pictures are a bit lacking and don't stand out so keep trying new things until you have a good variety of pictures that show you in different clothing and from different angles to show women what you're bringing to the table.
Hope this helps, you've put effort into your profile but it doesn't read great. |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Excellent profile with a very different approach and we think it is great.
Only one point of note...
"We guarantee"
should that line not read
"I guarantee"
as you are profiled as a single guy.
Apart from that top marks
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By *harAndBryCouple
over a year ago
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Better pics (you look like you're pretty photogenic with the body and ink and beard), less narky text (a lot of it is quite negative, and your specific requirement of a couple with a straight male puts off couples like us) and maybe (though you shouldn't have to) some words about why accomodating is hassle and why you seem to prefer daytime meets (it sounds like you're attached). Oh...and yes - there's more than one occasion where you've used "us" and that may be how you talk but the more cynical among us wonder if it's copied from somewhere.
Char would like to see more of you but you're so very, very far away.
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