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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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You’re a good looking chap, and no doubt many will agree with me. But most people read the profile of a message sender, so I’d consider a re-write to give your audience some information about you, what you hope to find, what’s in it for those you hope to meet. |
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Your profile is inoffensive, bland, meh. Still better than most.
Why should the women in their 20s pick you? Describe what you can offer, and what you are looking for.
Theres dozens, maybe hundreds of single males, looking for very few single women, so you need to sell yourself. Especially with such a narrow age range.
Also, the torso shot. Baggy clothes, and no face. With a grotty background. Disposable razor lying on the floor behind you. It's not enticing.
Maybe replace it with a similar pose, but naked, or wearing underwear, and a clean background.
The other two are better, show your face and give an impression of who you are.
But you're trying to improve, so good luck and happy fabbing. |
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By *panddaCouple
over a year ago
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"Your profile is inoffensive, bland, meh. Still better than most.
Why should the women in their 20s pick you? Describe what you can offer, and what you are looking for.
Theres dozens, maybe hundreds of single males, looking for very few single women, so you need to sell yourself. Especially with such a narrow age range.
Also, the torso shot. Baggy clothes, and no face. With a grotty background. Disposable razor lying on the floor behind you. It's not enticing.
Maybe replace it with a similar pose, but naked, or wearing underwear, and a clean background.
The other two are better, show your face and give an impression of who you are.
But you're trying to improve, so good luck and happy fabbing. "
Spot on.
At least you have said something but your profile is very poor and bland.
Someone that most people would just walk by. |
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It's 'meh' at best.
You have a tiny age bracket, which is absolutely fine if that is what you want but just don't expect a lot of women on here to be in it.
You talk about looking for like-minded people (in your advertised meets), but you don't explain your mindset so how would anybody know if they were like minded.
The bottom pic could maybe be rethought.
Overall,my general impression is that your profile is lazy.
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