It's not overly long, so I don't think that's an issue.
What I would focus more on is the content, so that people know what swinging experience you have, and perhaps add a bit more detail in the fun you'd like, as well as more about you.
I'd amend the mention of discreet - and be discreet all the time, rather than just when wanted - other wise it hints that you're not totally discreet.
Add some public photos too - people won't rush to ask to see your private photos, even though you have quite a few. |
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