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Is this a poor profile
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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Could you give advice on my profile on how to improve
thank you
Chris  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Could you give advice on my profile on how to improve
thank you
Chris "
The word hardcore may be off putting to some people |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Looks ok mate though I think it's "ensure" not "insure" saying that you could of written Shakespeare as most seem to just look for the letters vwe lol!! |
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By *lexaWoman
over a year ago
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I think your pics are very nice and we can see all of you in them - always a good start. IMO, I would offer more in your text though, particularly something that is endearing about yourself. Your text presents a rather cold attitude so it needs to sound warmer IMO. I also think that guys on here need a unique selling point so that there is something to make them really stand out from the others. Ie, something like 'I absolutely adore large breasts,' then women with large breasts will know that you will really fancy them and that they will be appreciated because of it. If it's on your profile already when they check you out, they know you're not just saying it. This is all IMHO so only suggestions. |
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I would just take the word hardcore out and change your location to east midlands |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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"Could you give advice on my profile on how to improve
thank you
Chris
The word hardcore may be off putting to some people "
I think that too. It's a very subjective term. |
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Definitely change the word to 'ensure', and there's a tiny typo too ...
'it we struggle to have a conversation'
where I think you meant to say -
'IF we struggle to have a conversation'
not that you'd use capital letters for it.
A range of photos would help too.
Welcome and Good luck! |
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Agree with what others have said.
You look lovely and love your home.
Good luck and have fun. |
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