Looking for some tips on updating my profile, i feel like it could be more appealing but i am terrible when it comes to writing about myself.
Can i have some constructive advice? Some of the advice ive seen on other threads has been pretty....well rude/unhelpful to be honest. Things like "we wouldnt message you" whilst maybe true. Doesnt help me better my profile 
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I’d tell you it’s above average but doesn’t stand out. Good range of pictures  agree with previous poster don’t like them being pixelated, but that’s a personal thing.
However to give you more constructive criticism or help, your age range.
How many women do you think are on here between the age of 22-35 ?
Then factor in your area (admittedly London is good) and how many other guys do you think are vying for their attention?
Some of those guys will show their face as well. In the end you are one of the majority on here trying to attract the minority, that’s all women of all ages, so limiting your chances won’t help you.
I won’t go in to details about the rest of your profile, as it’s ok, but consider widening your age ranges a bit |
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By *atenaWoman
over a year ago
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I have feedback but I worry that it's my personal opinion....
I don't mind the pixelated too much.... I understand the wish for privacy.... I find your main pic not the best.... (you look reallyyyyy Young) maybe use the suit one and just crop out your head?
I *think* women like suggestive pics..... (least I do) so the outline of a hard cock, your hand down your trousers etc.... it's more of a turn on.
Bio is a little lacking .... 'the wetter the better' is a little cringe |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Hi Ler,
You’ve got some good things to work with, for me it’s more about polishing up the loose ends to make your profile that bit more classy.
You are describing that you are on the look out for more mature women and maybe this is a bit of a generalisation but I would suggest the simple things like correct punctuation and sentence formatting can make a big difference to more mature women than it perhaps does to you get women.
Have a look through and dot the “I”s, capitals where needed etc.
You got off to a good start explaining that you like older women but perhaps explain why this is so and what you hope to get from an experience with an older woman that you could not from a women your own age.
The suit photos are a good start but expand on them, use black and white and some more suggestive poses, a short button or two undone , tops of boxers showing etc
The pixelation is understandable for privacy but perhaps consider using a more professional program to blur out rather than pixelate. Have a look at free programmes such a “GIMP” (graphic images manipulation programme) which is every bit as good as photoshop but totally free.
Finally, when taking selfies try to make the most of the timer function rather than mirrors which just IMHO look a bit cheesy.
You’ve got off to a good start just needs some spit and polish to make it stand out
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By (user no longer on site)
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"I’d tell you it’s above average but doesn’t stand out. Good range of pictures agree with previous poster don’t like them being pixelated, but that’s a personal thing.
However to give you more constructive criticism or help, your age range.
How many women do you think are on here between the age of 22-35 ?
Then factor in your area (admittedly London is good) and how many other guys do you think are vying for their attention?
Some of those guys will show their face as well. In the end you are one of the majority on here trying to attract the minority, that’s all women of all ages, so limiting your chances won’t help you.
I won’t go in to details about the rest of your profile, as it’s ok, but consider widening your age ranges a bit "
Totally agree about the age thing as I've seen some stunning ladies on here in their 40s,50,60, I mean think about it, Jennifer Aniston is in her 50s and I bet you wouldn't turn her down! |
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