"What was wrong with your old profile? Seems you were having some fun. Personally i don't get it but most definitely a lot will. Happy fabbing  "
Thankyou. Indeed I was having fun but the text seemed tired and outdated so have given it a refresh but I’m wondering if I have refreshed it a tad too much... |
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"I had a mixture of poetry and prose before but now gone all out poetry and wander if that’s a bit OTT 
The profile would put me off"
Thankyou for the honest feedback... that’s why I want to put it to the test in here as what sounded to me like a brilliant idea at the time may not be all that great. |
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"It’s good and I like the text, I think you come across really well. It’s what I would expect from someone who obviously is in the arts
The verifications also back up my theory as well
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Thankyou Steph  |
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It wouldn't pull me in and perhaps seems like it could have been instead part of a dating profile. Its scope doesn't include much that's around sex, apart from your club membership. I'd suggest a rebalancing away from humour? and personal life interests towards your sexual self, so that others can appreciate how you will be different or better for them than others. You don't need to focus on the competetivity but as it's truly here for you single men, it's a factor that your profile needs to ensure you win as you should.
Your pics were mixed for me. If you fully want stage acting shots, perhaps just 1 would be enough? I'm assuming cos play isn't a key theme for your sex life. They have the focus on showing your physique, not cock, which is the right thing to do. As physiques change, as yours does, perhaps refreshing them so that all are very recent. You'd probably be improving things if you smiled and naturally - others could record your relaxed essence perhaps more easily than via selfies. |
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