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Gave up after the second paragraph. As already highlighted you refer to verifications that you don't have. 
The lack of any grammar makes it very difficult to read.
Your first selling point is to put down other users...
Other than that a picture where you smile might help, And 3 near identical meet today ads, could, just possibly be perceived as desperate.
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It's by far from the worst profiles on here, so you've done pretty good. 
The secret is to ensure that it tells your target audience what they want. You've mentioned VWE, but this means different sizes to different people, so you may as well expand on the details.
Check the typos, as mentioned by others, for example, use 'too', when you mean also, etc. And ' I'm ' is mostly correct, but there's one of them that is wrongly 'Im', no apostrophe.
Keep your profile regularly updated, refreshed and interesting. Really focus on what you're offering, details always help, and keep it light and show that you're approachable, friendly etc.
Check your photos, as some of them shrink, when clicked to enlarge them - this especially is the case with your cock pic, which is a gorgeous cock, but the photo shrinks it down, so does it no justice!
Good luck! Sophiex
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"I didnt read it because your horny stud thing put me off
Just my opinion "
We thought the same, how can he possibly be a 'stud' if; a) can't get any meets, and b) why would a guy with such an inflated opinion if his own prowess, need to be on a swingers site to get laid if he was such a stud?
Self taken pics with a cameraphone is mightily sad, after all, such a stud would surely have met a girl to take pics for him? The non-smiling ' I'll try to look mean and moody' shots, just make him look like a miserable git. The close up face shot, shows what looks like greasy hair.
Start again, is our opinion.
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Totally agree, come on a smile your pictures look like your as miserable as f**k. We come on here for fun and frolics not misery so put new pictures up and please change your heading x |
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"I didnt read it because your horny stud thing put me off
Just my opinion
We thought the same, how can he possibly be a 'stud' if; a) can't get any meets, and b) why would a guy with such an inflated opinion if his own prowess, need to be on a swingers site to get laid if he was such a stud?
Self taken pics with a cameraphone is mightily sad, after all, such a stud would surely have met a girl to take pics for him? The non-smiling ' I'll try to look mean and moody' shots, just make him look like a miserable git. The close up face shot, shows what looks like greasy hair.
Start again, is our opinion.
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Sorry Simon, it's not a very appealing profile... No offence, maybe you should start again and focus on the truth rather than what you think people want to see. Your photos are extremely bad, they are all the same pose, boring, untidy bedroom, the most unattractive set of boxer shorts, you dont look sporty or athletic, mean Simon, need I say more.
On a positive note, I would strongly suggest you focus on your bicurious side, there are lots of couples who want n extra guy to join in, not just with her, but to suck cock too.l.l.!
Just be honest Simon, we can spot the bullshit from a mile away, focus on your willingness to fulfill fantasies by being with both the guy and girl...
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